My winter holidays plans
Hi classmates! Today I'm going to talk about my holidays plans.
Like all the years, my winter holidays will be in Santiago, because I don't travel in this season. In this holidays, I will can sleep many hours and I don't will think in study, I just will rest and I will entertain with my friends and my girlfriend.
On this holidays, I would like travel to any city with sea, especially Viña del Mar. I like the cities with sea in winter because that cities are very quiet in this season, and too is very relaxing the sea's song when the beach are empty. I would like travel to Viña del Mar with my girlfriend, because we are very funny when we are together and too we like travel to other sites.
My ideal holidays would be if I travel to other country. I would like visit many countries, for example Brasil, Spain, England, Italy between others. I hope any day have this holidays of my dreams with my friends, my family or my girlfriend.
Well, I talk you about my holidays plans and my ideal holidays, ¿What are your plans for this holidays?
Bye!
Hello
ReplyDeleteSleep is what we all need. The beach in this season is really calm and good to relax.
Greetings.
The city of Viña del Mar is great! I hope that you will travel to this place :)
ReplyDeleteHi Roberto,
ReplyDeleteBe careful with your sentence formulation and grammar because there are many basic mistakes.
Some important comments:
NEVER SAY I will can sleep AND I don't will think in study.
Say: I will sleep and will not think of studying.
Say: "On THESE holidays" (PLURAL) THIS (IS SINGULAR),
ALSO, IT is very relaxing the SOUND OF THE SEA when the beachES are empty
and we like travel to other sites, TOO. (TOO IS ALWAYS IN FINAL POSITION. IN THE MIDDLE YOU CAN USE "AND", "ALSO".
DON´T FORGET: I would like TO visit
I hope SOME day I have THESE holidays
Well, I TOLD you about my holidays plans and my ideal holidays, What are your plans for this holidays?
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