The place of my dreams: Rio de Janeiro
Hello classmates! I will told about the place that I would like visit.
The place that I want meet is Brasil, specifically Rio de Janeiro. I want to go here because it is very beautiful. I dont know this city, but Rio de Janeiro have gigantic beach, and it is very idyllic. I also want meet the great monument called Cristo Redentor and the mountain called Pan de Azucar.
I would like go to Rio de Janeiro with my friends, because they also want meet that city. The ideal season to go is summer, because here are sun everyday and we will can go to the beach everytime.
When I finish the university, I will keep money for my travel, because it must be great! I will travel by bus, because here I will can see better the landscape and also this is more cheap. I am waiting for this travel, and I know that I will visit Rio de Janeiro.
Bye everybody!
Hello
ReplyDeletegoing to the beach every day sounds really cool and it's a beautiful place.
Greetings c:
Hi. Oh! me also like Rio!! jaja. See you
ReplyDeleteI love the beachs of Brazil, it's like the paradise haha, see you!
ReplyDeleteGood Roberto,
ReplyDeleteI also would like to visit Rio!
Some comments:
When you use the verb "will" the next verb goes in its base form (present). So you say, "I WILL TELL YOU"
You "visit" a place, and you "meet" A PERSON
You also "save" money.
Finally, SAY:
"because THE DAYS ARE ALWAYS SUNNY AND WE CAN GO TO THE BEACH ALL THE TIME.
NEVER SAY "WILL CAN", IT DOESN´T EXIST!
2 POINTS